Calvin's Persuasive Writing

Himalayas

Do you want a holiday of a lifetime? Well now you can; all you’ve got to do is visit the world famous Himalayas. Book now, go as soon as possible!

Wildlife

The wonderful Himalayas are very well known for its wonderful wildlife. One of the most amazing animals is a snow leopard, they are well known for their outstanding adaptations: one of them being their long tails to help them balance. Another well-known animal at the Himalayas is a yak, which is well known for its three enlarged toes which help it grip to the mountains. The cute red panda has a large tail to help it grip, as well as that it has sharp claws to help it climb.

Cities, towns and festivals

Leh (in India) has some stunning views, in fact it has some of the worlds most famous. In Nepal, there are many beautiful towns, some of which are very colourful. Nepal is also very well known  for how many Buddhist temple there are. The awe-inspiring towns are also known for their colourful festivals.

Himalayas: the best holiday you could ever have. Why would you miss a holiday of your life? Visit the Himalayas-book now!

Cameron's persuasive writing

Himalayas/festivals/animals

Do you want to see the spectacular, views? It’s brilliant then go to the Himalayas. The spectacular views’ do you want to miss this enjoyable holiday of your life? The world famous place the magnificent animals a breath taking sky diving experience.

You’ll never regret it over the mountains there’s a national park there’s a variety to choose from.

Festivals/There’s parades colourful masks costumes that are beautiful.

Animals/Snow leopards there adapted to, the cold the red panda its weight helps it climb skinny twigs its very hyper there fur like the snow leopards face the fury magnificent creatures.

The best experience of all time it looks like a lot of fun have a try.

Charlie's persuasive writing

Himalayas!

Animals

In the extraordinary wildlife in the Himalayas there are packs of animals.

The habitats in the Himalayas me myself I don’t know how they do it.

The Red panda I think is the cutest animal ever. The Red panda is a very smart intelligent creature it can climb trees it’s very smart at hiding it is basically a panda like creature with a red back and it’s just like a panda and just with some red fur.

In the Himalayas Why don’t you visit Darjeeling it’s a temple in India. In Nepal the landscapes are beautiful as soon as you spot them your face will drop.

Mountains!

In the Himalayas the mountain range is great there is a range of mountains including the famous Mount Everest

I do very much hope you would recommend this to your family and friends do you want to go? Whenever you next go on holiday think the Himalayas!

Cortney's persuasive writing

Do you want to see some wonderful wildlife? Then Why not visit the

Beautiful Himalayas.

Wonderful Wildlife

There are some amazing animals in the Himalayas. There are some outstanding snow leopards the snow leopards have stunning fur. They can camouflage in the mountaintops.  There Fick fur keeps them warm.  

It is worth every penny. Hope you would love to visit the Himalayas. Buy  your tickets now .

Daisy's persuasive writing

Do you want the holiday of a life time? Well if you do, go and visit the Himalayas for the sake of you.

                 

Buddhist temples:

My dad’s a Buddhist. He said it’s a wonder full place to go because he went there to worship Buddha at the tigers nest in buttan the view is spectacular.

Festivals 

The brightly coloured festivals are an exciting for tourists yet they have amazing masks and outfits which are entirely amazing the way they make them by their artistic skills which are highly amazing.

David's persuasive writing

Have you ever wanted an amazing adventurous holiday? Then go to the mountainous Himalayans!

If you ever went to the beautiful Himalayans, you will experience some amazing animals. Everybody knows that the Himalayan wildlife is the best, because there are lots of extraordinary animals out there like enormous Yaks, friendly Bears, cute Birds and loads more. Why not go there now and meet the inspiring animals.

There are many magnificent views near the outstanding Himalayans so do you want to hear some breath taking places in the Himalayans? Then listen here. You should go to the great lakes because it is a fascinating place to go to. You could see the glistering lake which is transparent.

 

Do you want an outstanding city in the Himalayans? Then you must rush there so you cannot miss out! There are stunning cities to visit in the amazing Himalayans!

Alfie's persuasive writing

Have you ever have a relaxing holiday well book your tickets at the fascinating Himalayas  

                        adventure sport

You can do boating races dragon boating water rides at Himalayas.

                       Himalayas wildlife

Snow leopards dears bears bamboo foxes wood piker this are wildlife

                                    Himalayas city

Do you know Himalayas has got five cities called India, katmandoo, dinfenen, porkeen,leninda.

Himalayas has a mountain called Mount Everest, it is the biggest mountain in the world.

Do you want to go to the Himalayas and spend time with your family and friends? It will be lovely if you go to the Himalayas now.

Jacob's persuasive writing

So when the last time you had an action was packed holiday?

Also do you want to be the envy of all your friends?

So do you want to leave all your worries behind, then go to the amazing Himalayas?

Firstly, wildlife red bears are so cuddly they also look like a warm teddy bear and there face look like a cat. Snow leopards have very long tails so they can curl up into a ball to make them warm. Splits have huge ears so they can hear a predator coming. Splits also have long tails so they can balance on trees.

Next cool activates you could go fishing find some beautiful fish .you would go camping in wonderful forest. You would bungee jump from enormous cliffs which are about 100 feet long. Go swimming in the most stunning, magnicifiant and inspiring lakes in the wold.  Do you dear want to hike the deadlift, breath taking mounting in the world?

The beautiful Himalayas are a beautiful wonderland never to be missed.

Jagoda's persuasive writing

                                             HIMALAYAS

When was the last time you had a calm and relaxing holiday? Then visit the happy Himalayas   and feel like you are at the top of the world! Why   not book a ticket tonight if you fancy   . Do you want to be the envy of all your   friends?    The   happy Himalayas it’s a winter, wonderland.     

                                             

                                                    LANDSCAPES

The lands are so incredible, it is guaranteed   you will be amazed .Surly it is not hard to see that…Tibet is one of the most vibrant city you will ever know;   it’s   relaxing and calming sounds of the river valley, which   is   runs    though there every day. All so   the   biggest   mountain in the worlds lays there (Mount Everest)! When you will see its    beauty,   it will take your breath away you could also see the great lake. This thing will never be seen in your eyes ageing. It’s worth   little penny!

                                                       WILDLIFE

The snow leopard is not able to be seen in England; of the climate, so if you want to see one visit the national Himalayan Park. Also you could see the   red    panda, and how it runs around in the snow.     The Himalayan national park is amazing and the amount of exotic   animals   you could see is   incredible. The amount of tourists that   visit each year is unbelievable!

The Himalayas is a happy country where lots of people are loyal to each other .Surly it is not hard to see that… there is no better place on earth there for you must go and visit! All the things I have told you show the proof   it’s the BEST place in the entire world!!!!!!!!!!!

Jaii's persuasive writing

Go to the amazing Himalayan zoo and see the famous red panda, the awesome black bear, the beautiful snow leopard, the steady red jet and the crazy looking jumping spider. The fluffy red panda is like a cat mixed with a gummy bear.

 DO you want an action packed holiday with just family and friends? Go to the Himalayas.

Set yourself a cool challenge of climbing the highest peaks in the world

Go to the fortress in the Himalayas. The fortress survived a war between the Russians. The fortress is also a palace that belongs to an Indian king

Once went, never left.

Josh's persuasive writing

When was the last time you went on an amazing holiday? Also do you want to be the envy of all you friends? Book now for the spectacular Himalayas.

The wildlife is outstanding. A cute red panda is like a big warm cat furthermore it is like a big teddy. In the middle of the magnificent mountains. There are spectacular snow leopards they have long tails which they wrap around themselves to keep warm.       

The cities in the Himalayas are outstanding! Darjeeling has the most breath taking views of all times. Leh has the most beautiful buildings and the mountains will take your breath away.

The sports are very fun you get to do the best bungee jumping you can do that and boating if you go to the outstanding Himalayas. It is a 100% you will have fun.

Kaylm's persuasive writing

When   was   the last time you went on holiday?

In the Himalayas there are lots of animals like red fox, snow leopards and black bears. The red fox is a small like fox, its habitat is in the Himalayas.

 In the Himalayas there are lots of houses and shops.

The Himalayas has lots of houses and has lots of shops so they come to the Himalayas. By your ticket now.

Kyle's persuasive writing

In the amazing Himalayas there is a national park with a range of animals like a cute red panda, snow leopards and yaks. A red panda lives in the incredible Himalayas and they are very cute to. Red pandas are like a cat and a fox mixed together but a bit cuter. They can also grip onto a lot of things. The snow leopards also live in the Himalayas and are very good predators. Snow leopards have huge nostrils, because they are very high up so that means that they need to take deep breathes.

There are beautiful city’s and in them are outstanding festivals .They create their own imagination, there masks are really cool. There fabulous masks have lots of very interesting patterns and colours. The colours on their masks are vibrant and beautiful. The people that make the costumes take a lot of time and care.

The adventures you can have are amazing. They’re some really cool ones that you can do. Lots of people can do different things like yak riding and bungee jumping. People do these activities all the time I want to do yak riding it sounds fun. You can do all of these things in the amazing Himalayas.

Himalayas : the best action holiday you will ever have. 

Leoni's persuasive writing

Himalayas

Do you want to miss out on an action packed holiday? If not, then go to the Himalayas.

The awe – inspiring sites:

The Fewa Lake is a beautiful site, because of all the vibrant boats. Punakha dzong [fortress] Bhuton is a wonderful building, especially because its right near a mirror like river. The colours of this beautiful building are red, white, yellow, brown and pink. Buddhist monastery [tigers nest ] this is on a – incredible – mountain you need to go see that .

The wonderful wildlife :

In the Himalayas , there is a great Himalayan park , you can see all the different animals . One of the incredible animals is  a snow leopard . A snow leopard is so lovely because of its lovely patterns . A red fox is also a really cool , it loves climbing trees .

To conclude , you should go to the Himalayas because it’s a wonderful place to be . I defiantly recommend you to go there .

Sarah's persuasive writing

When was the last time you had the best action pack holiday every?  

In the Himalayas  there a bear that is so cute. You can’t miss the red panda, it is a ruby red fur. The ruby red panda lives in Himalayas you cant miss it. The is a dark black bear who got fluffy fur to keep warm.

In Himalaya there are breath-taking house in the mountains cliff. You need to be brave to go to the house. People make house on cliff because they don’t like people talking. People don’t build it on the biggest mountain.

There is  also a festivals what happens every year. It is bright and colourful. They have clam music to dance to .

You will not regret it if you don’t go!  

Leo's persuasive writing

The Himalayas

   Do you want to go on an amazing holiday that will make your jaw drop? Well now all you got to do is to visit the magnificent Himalayas, because it’s worth every penny.

    In Kathmandu (Nepal) the outstanding buildings as colourful as a rainbow. Just outside of towns and cities, are the most fascinating mountain ranges of all time. The best mountain is the mind blowing Mount Everest.

  

    The Himalayas has beautiful wildlife such as Himalayan Quales, jumping Spiders and so on. The snow Leopard is adorable. Snow Leopards are adapted to snow. The Himalayan Quale fly’s and fly’s. Snow is great for snow Leopards.

Other countries in Himalayas is great it to see sites. There amazing mountains to see. The poor don’t really have things to see but the things to see are amazing everywhere is sporty even small towns. The rich cities has houses full of gold and made of gold.

Liam's persuasive writing

Himalayas                                                   

Do you want to go on a holiday that you will never forget? Then go to the amazing extraordinary and spectacular Himalayas?  

 WILDLIFE

The amazing snow leopard has huge nostrils so it can breathe more oxygen in its lungs. It is covered in white and black spots because it needs to be camouflaged to catch its prey. The huge black bear has razor sharp teeth like blades so it can catch its delicious prey.  The Red Panda has beautiful   ruby red fur.  Furthermore, it is very light to climb up the weakest trees.

SPORT

They do kayaking in the rampaging rivers so it makes it more difficult and exciting. There was a dull man who wasn’t very sporty, until he went kayaking and now he is still sporty, he never regretted it. Climb the magnificent Mount Everest if you dare? If you go mountain climbing, it would be so much fun.

FESTIVALS

In Tibet, they have the most colourful festivals you will ever see.  Their amazing costumes have got so many different colours on them like green, red, yellow and blue and many more.  You must see the amazing festivals moreover, you will be gob smacked.  Before the performance, the dancers have to be extremely organised which certainly shows in their outstanding performances.  They have to make the costumes before they can add bright colours to make them gorgeous.

Don’t miss out on an extraordinary, action packed holiday to the Himalayas.  A truly unforgettable experience! 

Martyn's persuasive writing

When was the last time you had an action packed holiday. Kindling in Tibet. The spectacular river is a bright green colour with white patches here and there.  Such a breath-taking sight.

It has colourful houses. There is world famous views. Why not go there, in order to leave your worries behind.

In the fantastic Himalayas, they have gorgeous snow leopards.

Snow leopards are good at climbing and have huge nostrils to enable them to cope with the climate.

Unless the snow leopard is camouflaged, it can’t catch its prey.

In the cool Himalayas, the habitat belongs to the proud Snow Leopard.

In the Himalayas it is cold however, it can be lovely and warm.

In the best Himalayas they have Snow Leopards, the Himalayan Quail, Red Fox, Black Bear and a Himalayan Goat.

The boat ride is quite hard. It is scary but thrilling!  Why not climb the Ginormous Mountains.  They are a mile high!  The festivals are extremely cool and so much fun.

Why not come along to the amazing Himalayas and experience all the fantastic places to visit.  Don’t miss out on a once in a lifetime opportunity! 

Millie's persuasive writing

Visit the Himalayas

Do you want a peak holiday? Then why not visit the unforgettable Himalayas!

If you go and visit the Himalayas you will never forget it, you have the inspiring blue lakes at the great lake. The amazing views at the top of the mountains are memorable. You can also see the banana boats crashing against the shimmering blue sea, and the ribent rocky rocks.

Go and visit the amazing animals (they are very cool). The festivals are fabulous, with their colourful stunning outfits. They will let you join in dancing with them, it will be the best time ever. Are you good at dancing?

You can visit the Punakha dzong and see their spectacular house and taste their delicious donuts. Their garden is the most amazing garden in the world. At night the house glows it will be the best time ever.

I guarantee you will have a breath-taking holiday.

Nancy's persuasive writing

                      Himalayas

Would you like to see the breath taking   Mount Everest? Then go to the magnificent Himalayas! When was the last time you had an action packed holiday? The Happy Himalayas are a wonderful, Winter wonderland. You must book a ticket tonight!

                                       Wildlife

Go to the breath taking Himalayas and you will see the stunning   Snow leopard. It is one of the most exotic animal in the Himalayas. The beautiful red panda is adapted to cold places because its thick fur keeps it warm. The wonderful black bear has enormous claws so it can climb to tall places.

                                                Tibet

Tibet is very vibrant, because of its culture. Go and visit the inspiring Himalayas.  One hundred % you will enjoy it!!! There are tall buildings which you can live in! You must travel there and try all the spectacular activities!!!

                 Types of sports

You must also try some of the sports in the Himalayas, for example Benjie jumping .The mountain climbing is one of the popular sports in the Himalayas, because the most mountains are there. You must try the mountain climbing. Also canoeing is a very popular sports, because there are many rivers in the Himalayas

So now you know all about the Himalayas, why don’t you actually go and visit it? The Himalayas is a calm country where everyone is king and helpful to each-other …Surely it is not hard to see how enjoyable place it is .There for you should book a ticket NOW!!! Just go to the Himalayas …

Ozair's persuasive writing

Do you want your imagination? Then go to the extraordinary Himalayas. The place everyone in the world wants to go. The best place in the whole world.

The remarkable red panda is the cutest animal you will ever see. Licking its paws, it will make you love it. The snow leopard has massive paws to walk in the winter wonderland. When it hunts, it walks so graceful. If you ever see a super snow leopard or a red panda then you’ll be amazed by the wonderful wildlife.

Unless you ever saw the beautiful buildings, then you’ll never know how colourful they really are. They are truly superb. Kathmandu’s brilliant buildings are in different shapes, which is really cool. The racing river, which is very fast, flows through the creative city of Tibet. They have the greatest mountains in the town.

The mountain climbing is great because you get the loveliest view ever. They have colourful masks: it makes them stand out. Why not try the Rocky River; they have great rivers.

Overall I know that you should go to the amazing Himalayas, which is the greatest place on earth. If you ever go to the Himalayas, then you’ll never regret it. Unless you want a holiday, stay at home. I want to go the Himalayas, in order to get a great holiday. Himalayas: the best holiday you will ever experience, which will be amazing.

Piotr's persuasive writing

When was the last time when you had action packed holiday   ?  Book your plan   Tick now and visit the fantastic, Himalayas!

You must   visit the Himalayas,   in the cool park is a sea place people go to the Himalayas,    this is the best place in the world.

THE extreme animals of the cool Himalayas really cool it is white tiger, orange panda, bears and black bears  in City you have to do sports muting,  climbing , bogey and rate board rafting. 

This is your last chance please people please.

Portia's persuasive writing

Come to the Himalayas you will have an action pact holiday to remember, where you can spend life time with friends and family and have such fun.

Have you ever had an action pact holiday? Well if you haven’t, then the Himalayas is the place to go.it will be an unforgettable experience and a holiday to remember

If you come to the unforgettable HIMALAYES then you will see all of the impeccable landscapes from the incredible buildings. All of the colours make the Himalayas look like Rainbow land and when you hear  land you think WOW don’t you .It’s not all about that the Himalayas is cold it’s all about what you can do in that cold weather.

Come buy the tickets now and have a lifetime. Just remember that this is a life time opportunity. With all the things to do it will keep you busy for a lifetime. Everything you will do will be like a dream. Just image all of the inspired animals that you can find there. Like leopards like and how they have amazing skills to watch. Come on and by you tickets , to night if you fancy.

Sam's persuasive writing

Do you want to leave all your worries behind? If so, then why not visit the extraordinary Himalayas, you’ll never regret it.

  Why not go see the spectacular wild life? Explore the dark as night black bear or a majestic yak, with massive horns roam the rocky landscape. Challenge yourself to a race against a rapid leopard. Why not sit down, lay back and relax as magnificent Himalayan quale’s flap their wings all around you.

  Why not have a peak of a time climbing breath-taking mountains (such as Mt. Everest)? Be on top of the world and walk through the clouds; Ride a canoe across the wondrous Fewa Lake as your reflection spreads all over the river.

  Admire the colours of Pokhara (in Nepal); or gaze down into the misty waters of Kangding (in Tibet). Stare into the city of Leh (in India) from its mountain top view. Why not explore the alien buildings of Kathmandu (in Nepal)?

  After reading this; do you want to go to the Himalayas? If so, go buy some thrill-ride tickets.

Bethany's persuasive writing

So when was the last time you had an action packed holiday? Also, do you want to be the envy of all your friends? Then why no visit the colourful, magnificent, berth taking wonderland which is Himalaya’s .Leave your worries   behind and be free. Are you going to let your worries annoy you?

ACTIVATIES

Why not do some exiting activities wise you’re here like: camping, fishing, adventure trills, mounting climbing and bungee jumping. Additionally, you could camp near glorious and do some fishing or camp near a towering mountain and do some mountain climbing and look at lovely views. It will take your breath away .How meanly sites there are. You might want to go on adventure trills or do some bungee jumping.

So what do you think of the Himalayas? Would you like to go there with your family and your friends? It’s an amazing country with many different cultures. The happy Himalayas is a great place to start a new life!!! Book a ticket tonight if you fancy?? Go to the colourful winter land Himalayas.

Antonya's persuasive writing

Do you want a relaxing unforgettable holiday? Well the Himalayas is the place.

 Book you’re ticket’s now it’s expensive but it’s worth it.                                                   

Come along and see the tallest mountain called Mount Everest the biggest mountain you will ever see. If you’re lucky you might even see a magnificent snow leopard up on one of the mountain on the mountain range.

 The Himalayan snow leopards have creamy pink pads on their paws that help them run up and down the mountain to catch their prey to eat. If you’re wondering how they don’t freeze to death it’s because they have really thick fur.

Parents if you’re kids want it to snow now well no more waiting for Christmas because the Himalayas is a winter wonder land it’s snow mad there book you’re  NOW!

If you’re lucky you might find a yak climbing up the mountain with a real shaggy coat that keeps it warm in the winter wonderland. If you look closely on the yak it has two toes. It has really sharp horns.

If I was you I would bring a camera to take to the Himalayas to take pictures.

Alan's persuasive writing

Do you want to leave your bad memories behind? Then why not then visit the Himalayas; you’ll never regret it in your whole life.

In the magnificent Himalayan national parks, there are a lot of amazing animals but the most amazing one is a Snow Leopard that is a just incredible animal. That has special nostrils that helps them breath, high up. In addition, the red panda is a lot smaller but a lot cuter than the snow leopard also it’s very clever. It can also balance on branches using their long tails. However, now comes in a wonderful animal named a yak. A yak has a really special stomach that can reach forty degrees inside. It also has special hooves that are spit in the middle to help them walk and climb up mountains.

The Himalayas is a cold place, however it has got some significant places like festivals. There is a gorgeous place in Tibet that organises a massive festival that is made each year. In addition, they get inspired of by animals. Very close to the Himalayan Mountains. There is a place called Leh (in India). It is a very poor place, but it has some really amazing views. However it has new buildings that are fantastic.

As you have listened to this writing what do you think of the Himalayas know?