Friday 23 October 2015

Calvin's Persuasive Writing

Himalayas
Do you want a holiday of a lifetime? Well now you can; all you’ve got to do is visit the world famous Himalayas. Book now, go as soon as possible!

Wildlife
The wonderful Himalayas are very well known for its wonderful wildlife. One of the most amazing animals is a snow leopard, they are well known for their outstanding adaptations: one of them being their long tails to help them balance. Another well-known animal at the Himalayas is a yak, which is well known for its three enlarged toes which help it grip to the mountains. The cute red panda has a large tail to help it grip, as well as that it has sharp claws to help it climb.

Cities, towns and festivals
Leh (in India) has some stunning views, in fact it has some of the worlds most famous. In Nepal, there are many beautiful towns, some of which are very colourful. Nepal is also very well known  for how many Buddhist temple there are. The awe-inspiring towns are also known for their colourful festivals.

Himalayas: the best holiday you could ever have. Why would you miss a holiday of your life? Visit the Himalayas-book now!


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