Friday 23 October 2015

Jagoda's persuasive writing

                                             HIMALAYAS

When was the last time you had a calm and relaxing holiday? Then visit the happy Himalayas   and feel like you are at the top of the world! Why   not book a ticket tonight if you fancy   . Do you want to be the envy of all your   friends?    The   happy Himalayas it’s a winter, wonderland.     
                                             
                                                    LANDSCAPES

The lands are so incredible, it is guaranteed   you will be amazed .Surly it is not hard to see that…Tibet is one of the most vibrant city you will ever know;   it’s   relaxing and calming sounds of the river valley, which   is   runs    though there every day. All so   the   biggest   mountain in the worlds lays there (Mount Everest)! When you will see its    beauty,   it will take your breath away you could also see the great lake. This thing will never be seen in your eyes ageing. It’s worth   little penny!

                                                       WILDLIFE
The snow leopard is not able to be seen in England; of the climate, so if you want to see one visit the national Himalayan Park. Also you could see the   red    panda, and how it runs around in the snow.     The Himalayan national park is amazing and the amount of exotic   animals   you could see is   incredible. The amount of tourists that   visit each year is unbelievable!

The Himalayas is a happy country where lots of people are loyal to each other .Surly it is not hard to see that… there is no better place on earth there for you must go and visit! All the things I have told you show the proof   it’s the BEST place in the entire world!!!!!!!!!!!


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