Tuesday 13 October 2015

Alan's persuasive writing

Do you want to leave your bad memories behind? Then why not then visit the Himalayas; you’ll never regret it in your whole life.
In the magnificent Himalayan national parks, there are a lot of amazing animals but the most amazing one is a Snow Leopard that is a just incredible animal. That has special nostrils that helps them breath, high up. In addition, the red panda is a lot smaller but a lot cuter than the snow leopard also it’s very clever. It can also balance on branches using their long tails. However, now comes in a wonderful animal named a yak. A yak has a really special stomach that can reach forty degrees inside. It also has special hooves that are spit in the middle to help them walk and climb up mountains.
The Himalayas is a cold place, however it has got some significant places like festivals. There is a gorgeous place in Tibet that organises a massive festival that is made each year. In addition, they get inspired of by animals. Very close to the Himalayan Mountains. There is a place called Leh (in India). It is a very poor place, but it has some really amazing views. However it has new buildings that are fantastic.
As you have listened to this writing what do you think of the Himalayas know?


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