Friday 23 October 2015

Millie's persuasive writing

Visit the Himalayas

Do you want a peak holiday? Then why not visit the unforgettable Himalayas!

If you go and visit the Himalayas you will never forget it, you have the inspiring blue lakes at the great lake. The amazing views at the top of the mountains are memorable. You can also see the banana boats crashing against the shimmering blue sea, and the ribent rocky rocks.

Go and visit the amazing animals (they are very cool). The festivals are fabulous, with their colourful stunning outfits. They will let you join in dancing with them, it will be the best time ever. Are you good at dancing?

You can visit the Punakha dzong and see their spectacular house and taste their delicious donuts. Their garden is the most amazing garden in the world. At night the house glows it will be the best time ever.

I guarantee you will have a breath-taking holiday.


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