Friday 23 October 2015

Jaii's persuasive writing

Go to the amazing Himalayan zoo and see the famous red panda, the awesome black bear, the beautiful snow leopard, the steady red jet and the crazy looking jumping spider. The fluffy red panda is like a cat mixed with a gummy bear.
 DO you want an action packed holiday with just family and friends? Go to the Himalayas.

Set yourself a cool challenge of climbing the highest peaks in the world
Go to the fortress in the Himalayas. The fortress survived a war between the Russians. The fortress is also a palace that belongs to an Indian king

Once went, never left.


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