Tuesday 13 October 2015

Antonya's persuasive writing

Do you want a relaxing unforgettable holiday? Well the Himalayas is the place.
 Book you’re ticket’s now it’s expensive but it’s worth it.                                                   
Come along and see the tallest mountain called Mount Everest the biggest mountain you will ever see. If you’re lucky you might even see a magnificent snow leopard up on one of the mountain on the mountain range.
 The Himalayan snow leopards have creamy pink pads on their paws that help them run up and down the mountain to catch their prey to eat. If you’re wondering how they don’t freeze to death it’s because they have really thick fur.
Parents if you’re kids want it to snow now well no more waiting for Christmas because the Himalayas is a winter wonder land it’s snow mad there book you’re  NOW!
If you’re lucky you might find a yak climbing up the mountain with a real shaggy coat that keeps it warm in the winter wonderland. If you look closely on the yak it has two toes. It has really sharp horns.

If I was you I would bring a camera to take to the Himalayas to take pictures.


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