Jacob's persuasive writing

So when the last time you had an action was packed holiday?

Also do you want to be the envy of all your friends?

So do you want to leave all your worries behind, then go to the amazing Himalayas?

Firstly, wildlife red bears are so cuddly they also look like a warm teddy bear and there face look like a cat. Snow leopards have very long tails so they can curl up into a ball to make them warm. Splits have huge ears so they can hear a predator coming. Splits also have long tails so they can balance on trees.

Next cool activates you could go fishing find some beautiful fish .you would go camping in wonderful forest. You would bungee jump from enormous cliffs which are about 100 feet long. Go swimming in the most stunning, magnicifiant and inspiring lakes in the wold.  Do you dear want to hike the deadlift, breath taking mounting in the world?

The beautiful Himalayas are a beautiful wonderland never to be missed.