Friday 23 October 2015

Leoni's persuasive writing

Himalayas

Do you want to miss out on an action packed holiday? If not, then go to the Himalayas.
The awe – inspiring sites:
The Fewa Lake is a beautiful site, because of all the vibrant boats. Punakha dzong [fortress] Bhuton is a wonderful building, especially because its right near a mirror like river. The colours of this beautiful building are red, white, yellow, brown and pink. Buddhist monastery [tigers nest ] this is on a – incredible – mountain you need to go see that .
The wonderful wildlife :
In the Himalayas , there is a great Himalayan park , you can see all the different animals . One of the incredible animals is  a snow leopard . A snow leopard is so lovely because of its lovely patterns . A red fox is also a really cool , it loves climbing trees .
To conclude , you should go to the Himalayas because it’s a wonderful place to be . I defiantly recommend you to go there .


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