Friday 23 October 2015

Martyn's persuasive writing

When was the last time you had an action packed holiday. Kindling in Tibet. The spectacular river is a bright green colour with white patches here and there.  Such a breath-taking sight.
It has colourful houses. There is world famous views. Why not go there, in order to leave your worries behind.

In the fantastic Himalayas, they have gorgeous snow leopards.
Snow leopards are good at climbing and have huge nostrils to enable them to cope with the climate.
Unless the snow leopard is camouflaged, it can’t catch its prey.
In the cool Himalayas, the habitat belongs to the proud Snow Leopard.
In the Himalayas it is cold however, it can be lovely and warm.

In the best Himalayas they have Snow Leopards, the Himalayan Quail, Red Fox, Black Bear and a Himalayan Goat.

The boat ride is quite hard. It is scary but thrilling!  Why not climb the Ginormous Mountains.  They are a mile high!  The festivals are extremely cool and so much fun.

Why not come along to the amazing Himalayas and experience all the fantastic places to visit.  Don’t miss out on a once in a lifetime opportunity! 


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