Friday 23 October 2015

Sarah's persuasive writing

When was the last time you had the best action pack holiday every?  
In the Himalayas  there a bear that is so cute. You can’t miss the red panda, it is a ruby red fur. The ruby red panda lives in Himalayas you cant miss it. The is a dark black bear who got fluffy fur to keep warm.
In Himalaya there are breath-taking house in the mountains cliff. You need to be brave to go to the house. People make house on cliff because they don’t like people talking. People don’t build it on the biggest mountain.
There is  also a festivals what happens every year. It is bright and colourful. They have clam music to dance to .
You will not regret it if you don’t go!  


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