Friday 23 October 2015

Leo's persuasive writing

The Himalayas
   Do you want to go on an amazing holiday that will make your jaw drop? Well now all you got to do is to visit the magnificent Himalayas, because it’s worth every penny.

    In Kathmandu (Nepal) the outstanding buildings as colourful as a rainbow. Just outside of towns and cities, are the most fascinating mountain ranges of all time. The best mountain is the mind blowing Mount Everest.
  
    The Himalayas has beautiful wildlife such as Himalayan Quales, jumping Spiders and so on. The snow Leopard is adorable. Snow Leopards are adapted to snow. The Himalayan Quale fly’s and fly’s. Snow is great for snow Leopards.

Other countries in Himalayas is great it to see sites. There amazing mountains to see. The poor don’t really have things to see but the things to see are amazing everywhere is sporty even small towns. The rich cities has houses full of gold and made of gold.


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