Ozair's persuasive writing

Do you want your imagination? Then go to the extraordinary Himalayas. The place everyone in the world wants to go. The best place in the whole world.

The remarkable red panda is the cutest animal you will ever see. Licking its paws, it will make you love it. The snow leopard has massive paws to walk in the winter wonderland. When it hunts, it walks so graceful. If you ever see a super snow leopard or a red panda then you’ll be amazed by the wonderful wildlife.

Unless you ever saw the beautiful buildings, then you’ll never know how colourful they really are. They are truly superb. Kathmandu’s brilliant buildings are in different shapes, which is really cool. The racing river, which is very fast, flows through the creative city of Tibet. They have the greatest mountains in the town.

The mountain climbing is great because you get the loveliest view ever. They have colourful masks: it makes them stand out. Why not try the Rocky River; they have great rivers.

Overall I know that you should go to the amazing Himalayas, which is the greatest place on earth. If you ever go to the Himalayas, then you’ll never regret it. Unless you want a holiday, stay at home. I want to go the Himalayas, in order to get a great holiday. Himalayas: the best holiday you will ever experience, which will be amazing.