Friday 23 October 2015

Sam's persuasive writing

Do you want to leave all your worries behind? If so, then why not visit the extraordinary Himalayas, you’ll never regret it.
  Why not go see the spectacular wild life? Explore the dark as night black bear or a majestic yak, with massive horns roam the rocky landscape. Challenge yourself to a race against a rapid leopard. Why not sit down, lay back and relax as magnificent Himalayan quale’s flap their wings all around you.
  Why not have a peak of a time climbing breath-taking mountains (such as Mt. Everest)? Be on top of the world and walk through the clouds; Ride a canoe across the wondrous Fewa Lake as your reflection spreads all over the river.
  Admire the colours of Pokhara (in Nepal); or gaze down into the misty waters of Kangding (in Tibet). Stare into the city of Leh (in India) from its mountain top view. Why not explore the alien buildings of Kathmandu (in Nepal)?
  After reading this; do you want to go to the Himalayas? If so, go buy some thrill-ride tickets.


1 comment:

  1. Sam real well done your rhetorical questions are really good and my favorite thing is the first rhetorical question( Do you want to leave worries behind? ) amazing!!!

    Alan

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